In some countries celebrities complain about way about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

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I believe that every person including celebrities should have their own privacy and can choose which part of their private

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to be shared and open

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. Some may argue that as a public

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along with

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professional

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, their private

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entertaintment

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consequence

for their fame. As far as I know, many people in different countries have

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curious about their

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private

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sometimes their private

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not affect their

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. Personally speaking, as long as they

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professionally, their private issues would not

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matter. Without a doubt personal area is important because I believe every human being have their own secret that they did not want to share.

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out to

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there are some kind of uncomfortable feelings that can affect someone's mental health if they are not ready with the responses. The watcher will have some different views on the issue, some will

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good

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others will talking bad. In conclusion, as privacy is a basic human need it is important to respect someone's private

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if

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private

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privacy

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issues are not affecting

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professional

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, we as

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should not

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so hard to dig down

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is happening in an idol's private

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life

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