Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.
A wedding is a sacred ceremony, wherein a wedding is not only about two people but a blend of two big families. In some wedding traditions, it even takes a week and the entire family to have a wedding feast. Recently, wedding traditions have changed from a simple party to a sophisticated ceremony.
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we will plan to make a bigger party to accommodate everyone.
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, social media holds an important role these days. Showing happiness on social media is like a ritual nowadays. It is not legit if we have not shared our happy moments on the internet. This
habit challenges us to become happier than others. It applies to every event in our life including wedding ceremonies. We want to make it better than the others even though we have no budget for that. Some of us will lend the money just to celebrate a lavish wedding to keep our pride high.
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is a negative development because it creates a new trend where not everybody has the budget to hold a bigger and more expensive wedding. And some of them who are willing to keep it big will lend the money they need and it leads to a bad situation after.Submitted by prawitacandrasari on
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