You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter,– Say how you found out about the plans– Explain what problems your neighborhood will face – Suggest some possible solutions to those problem

Dear Sir or Madam, 
This
is Laila Hefni, and I am one of the residents of Al Rehab city where a new airport is
due to
be built. I am writing to lodge an official complaint about the construction work in my neighbourhood.  Let me first tell you that I have read an article in the local newspapers stating that there is a governmental project of establishing an internal airline next to my place of residence. For your information, not only would
this
event negatively affect the traffic flow, but
also
tremendously would young academics suffer. I believe you would appreciate how disappointed I was when I recognised
this
news
due to
the fact that Al-Rehab is a vibrant area full of schools, medical institutions and public gardens. As you
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doubt aware, 
this
may cause terrible accidents owing to the upsurged number of automobiles on the streets. Considering that locals would bear the brunt of
this
construction, I wish to reconsider
such
a project
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and seriously attempt to relocate its decided location. By doing
this
, the safety and comfort of residents would be secured. Looking forward to reading
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your reply about what actions you intended to take. Faithfully yours,  Laila Hefni
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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