Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Fisayo, It is of great joy to receive the news that you are thinking about learning to drive. Driving makes life easier and very comfortable, especially when you have a large family. The knowledge of driving can become easy to implement when you practice it and go for a driving test.
Although
it is important you acquire a driving licence even when you are very good at driving,
This
licence serves as a right to be on the road to drive, not only that, it
also
, helps you to be aware of the rules and regulations on the road you need to adhere to. Interestingly, I know some good and affordable driving schools, where you will be thought both the theoretical and practical aspects of driving thoroughly, but I will recommend a particular one, where my son learnt how to drive. it is called Easyride driving school, they are government registered, so the government
also
recommend them to individuals.
In addition
, I will give you some tips to look out for when driving, these are things I learnt the hard way; always be conscious of the speed limit of the environment you find yourself in, and ensure you park at the right place,
this
will help you keep a clean record. In conclusion, I look forward to a ride with you after the completion of the learning. Yours sincerely, Mariam Omole
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