Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people think that government should not invest in scientific research
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as the exploration of Mars or other planets
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they should invest more in the country's development and improvement that we can do to save our
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earth. I completely agree with the statement and will discuss the same in the below paragraphs. To start with, there is a lot amount of money is being invested in projects with NASA to explore
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on another
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and do research on space for
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on another
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.
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is happening because of factors like the depletion of the ozone layer and deforestation. These factors not only reduce the level of oxygen on the
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but
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make
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life
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for humans miserable. But, is it really worth exploring other planets for
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or we should improve the one which is being provided to us by God.?
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is a question which should be addressed by every one of us. Mankind itself needs to take some valid actions to improve our
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earth and all the government should invest in researchers to make our
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more beautiful.
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, it would be better to spend money on the things we know for the betterment of society
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of exploring things that we do not know and even they are not in our reach as well.
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:- recycling plastic is bringing a revolution in our country and improving our
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which is improving our environment a bit. Even, people started planting new trees which will definitely impact and provide a better living for our future generations.
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, I always agree that we should invest in the improvement of the knowns
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of exploring the unknowns which would later end up achieving nothing.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
  • international cooperation
  • inspire
  • engage
  • boost the economy
  • long-term benefits
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