Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from international competitions. To what extent do you agree?

Some argue that extreme

sports

in international competitions and presented on TV programs, including boxing and martial art, should be prohibited since

this

leads to violence. I agree with

this

statement since it encourages

children

to imitate and affects

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their mentality.

Initially

, the reason why extreme

sports

programs on television and international competition should be banned,

this

leads

children

to imitate the

violence

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scene.

That is

to say, the fighting scene presenting triggers

children

to do a similar action,

such

as

hit

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and

kick

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the rival, resulting in people

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severely injured.

Therefore

, to avoid it

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and being imitated by

children

, the channel program

along with

International competition

,

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has to disappear permanently.

For example

, the government could make a policy to restrict or even erase the category of extreme

sports

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another sport

that is

suitable for all categories including

children

, like presenting badminton as a popular sport.

Furthermore

, the second consideration is a negative psychological effect, particularly

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children

's mentality.

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extreme

sports

competition

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continually, either on the platform or directly to watch in the stadium, affects their characters since they might be being the temperament person who has a high desire to fight with their friend despite it is small problems.

That is

why extreme

sports

have to ban due negative impact on

children

.

For instance

, When

children

get disturbed by their friends, they are not hesitant to fight with friends because they know how to fight their friends with the scenes of fighting from the world boxing event.

To conclude

,

although

extreme

sports

on TV programs and live international competitions might have benefits, they should be banned to display

due to

violent scenes, which affect

children

psychologically or mentally to imitate the fighting scenes.