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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet. What problems may this trend lead to? What solutions would you recomend?

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Despite the rapid growth in technology development, students have more ability to access the
internet
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 than in the past.
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 behaviour is leading to some problems in their lives.
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 essay will present issues and possible solutions that could result in reducing undesirable circumstances. In terms of the problem, allowing
children
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 easy access to the online platform has numerous drawbacks.
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, on the
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, there are many types of people available on social media platforms
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 as Facebook and Instagram.
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, it is possible for an infant to meet a bad guy, resulting in being deceived in the end.
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, various contents on the
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 contain violence in their content.
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, games and movies
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, if
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 closely observe them, they will receive some of the harsh.
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, spending a long time serving on the
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 may cause short self-control in young people. Some research mentions that users who pay a lot of attention to some short video platforms like TikTok may have ADHD (Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder). In terms of the solution,
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, all of the above issues have many ways to solve. Beginning with their parents' focus, mothers and fathers should take care of their
children
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's electronic devices, which can reach the
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internet
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. They have to check what content their son visits frequently. If they
found
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 some bad matter, They should warn their son and tell him about the reason why he should not visit
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 page. Another way is protection, the parent should explain the disadvantage of the online application before allowing infants to access them.
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 will teach their child to be a reasonable person. In a nutshell,
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 social media has many issues, it
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 has its solver, especially for young people who do not have enough experience in living.
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, if
children
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 use the
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, it must be under the recommendation of their parents.
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