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An ageing population is affecting parts of the world

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An ageing
population
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 is affecting parts of the
world
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Population
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aging
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 is the change that occurs with
age
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 when people are no longer able to perform and satisfy their needs in the same way.
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Population
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 Prospects 2019, the elderly
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 (over 65 years) exceeded the
population
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 under five years of
age
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 in 2018 for the first time in history, and its size is expected to double between 2019 and 2050. The
aging
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 of the
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 has important consequences on the Social Security
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. The
aging
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 of the
population
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 has a direct impact on economic growth by reducing the
labor
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 force and increasing the pension
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.       The health
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 has a great job with the adult
population
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 since they require special care,
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 and the older the risk of chronic diseases is higher and the cost of these is higher. Older people depend on or need support for the development of their basic and daily needs, disability affects the elderly
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 on a large scale, requiring special care to guarantee their well-being and quality of life. The
World
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 Health Organization (WHO) has identified active
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 as one of the main objectives with three pillars: health, participation and security to guarantee well-being and
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healthy life for the elderly
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. In the
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, programs are already being carried out that include the elderly
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 where they can carry out physical activities and leisure to avoid diseases and the loss of functionality of the body,
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 leads to
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population
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 feeling in a pleasant environment for
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Population
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aging
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 has a direct impact on economic growth by reducing the size of the
labor
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 force. Each
age
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 group has a different level of productivity, the older
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 often refuses to change and new technologies, which affects the development of a company (Ozimek, 2018). The banking
system
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 is affected because the elderly
population
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 over a certain
age
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 cannot make bank loans and their borrowing capacity puts the economy of a country at risk. The increase each year in pensions based on
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 and work would cause a collapse of the economy because
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population
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 is increasing,
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 pension and
labor
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 regimes must be reprogrammed. The economic expenses of the elderly
population
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 are high since their needs are special and specialized people are required. The older
population
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 generates employment as
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 would be a positive point for the development of the country's economy
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