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It is better for people to grow up and live in the countryside than a big city. Do you agree ? Use specific reasons

#people #countryside #city
I hazard a guess there are quite differences between the
countryside
 and a big city.The
countryside
 places had been the most common
place
 where
people
 lived throughout their lives and thousands of years.The first
people
 didn't even know what the
countryside
 or city is.So let's assume that they are in the
countryside
 region.Even progenitors of the human race lived in the
countryside
place
,so
this
 statement leads us to the fact,that every human being deep inside subconsciously feels better and in peaceful condition with themselves in
this
 kind of
place
. In the
countryside
, all products,food,beverages,vegetables and so on - are natural products.That means there are no chemicals,no human being involved in the process (except digging,planting and etcetera).On top of that,
this
 product is healthier in comparison with others. But of course, the coin has two sides.
Countryside
 places aren't as improved in the internet,transportation, and communication as in big
cities
. To top off
this
 list we can say that
countryside
 is
such
 a great
place
 to spend your free
time
, leisure
time
 or even your life if you are not talkative and communicative
people
 but hardworking and love your space. Mind you of course there are
people
 who rather live in
cities
 than in
countryside
 places. And it seems to me that living in big
cities
 is more profitable than in the
countryside
.To make things clear let's bring some facts to the table.In the big
cities
, you do not have to worry about communication,because there's surely a
place
 where you can find wifi and use it for your own purposes,to talk to someone,chat with them and so on.And definitely, if you have social skills
such
 as communication and a confident character you can find someone to talk to.
Moreover
, you can
also
 find a job like smoking.I reckon it is
due to
 the demands of big
cities
.A big city means more
people
,more preferences and more needs of an employee.You can
also
 able to reach any type of food on your own.Most grocery stores work 7/24 so you can find almost everything at any
time
 of day and whenever you want.But of course, you have to overpay if you want something more quality. Let's sum up.Nowadays more and more
people
 heading up to big
cities
 and because of that, there is much more pressure than in the
countryside
. It is all up to you.If you reckon that you can handle all the new stuff that going on in the world,so you can courageously choose the big
cities
 and compete with others for a
place
 in the world. But if you are a quiet humble human being who loves spending
time
 in peaceful conditions with quite enough good foodstuffs and you feel convenient in the wild nature that's maybe the reason you should pick the
countryside
 as your main
place
 to stay.
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