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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
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The line graph presents the
number
 of
visitors
 who are visiting a specific
Caribean
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Caribbean
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island
 over seven
years
.
Overall
, the total of
tourists
 who are visiting the
island
 is increasing. The
visitors
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number of visitors
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 who
stay
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stayed
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 on
island
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the island
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 showed a great
number
 in the first
years
,
while
 dropped the
last
 tears,
In contrast
 with the
visitors
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number of visitors
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 who
is
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are
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 stating on cruise ships, they increased over the span.Totally, the
two
type
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types
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 of
tourists
reveal
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reveals
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 a dramatic
growen
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growth
 in these
years
. The first
type
 of people who are
stying
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staying
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 on cruise ships
start
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started
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 with about
quarter
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a quarter
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million
visitors
 to the
island
 in 2010 and
this
number
 went up in 2011 to reach half
million
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a million
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,
then
 dropped again in 2012 to the same
number
 as
2010
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in 2010
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 at 0.3
million
.
However
,the
number
 of
tourists
 rose gradually over the
followed
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following
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years
 from half
million
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a million
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 to reach the highest
number
 of
two
million
visitors
 in 2017. The second
type
 of
visitors
 who are staying on
island
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the island
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 start with around 7000
thousends
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thousand
thousands
 in 2010 to reach 1.5
million
 in 2013.
Then
 from 2013 to 2015, it
remain
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remains
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 steady at 1.5
million
tourists
.For the
last
two
years
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,years
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 the
number
 of
island's
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the island's
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visitors
 fluctuated to reach
approximitly
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approximately
 one-fifty
Million
 of
visitors
. The total
number
 of the
two
type
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types
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 of
tourists
 is rising
up upon
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in
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 these
years
 and it reach over 3.5
Million
 people in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, years, tourists, two, type, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 5 times.
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