The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
The line graph presents the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who are visiting a specific Use synonyms
Caribean
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
over seven Use synonyms
years
.
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Overall
, the total of Linking Words
tourists
who are visiting the Use synonyms
island
is increasing. The Use synonyms
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visitors
who Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
stay
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stayed
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island
showed a great Correct article usage
the island
number
in the first Use synonyms
years
,Use synonyms
while
dropped the Linking Words
last
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In contrast
with the Linking Words
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visitors
who Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
is
stating on cruise ships, they increased over the span.Totally, the Change the verb form
are
two
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type
of Change to a plural noun
types
tourists
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reveal
a dramatic Change the verb form
reveals
growen
in these Correct your spelling
growth
years
.
The first Use synonyms
type
of people who are Use synonyms
stying
on cruise ships Correct your spelling
staying
start
with about Wrong verb form
started
quarter
Correct article usage
a quarter
million
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visitors
to the Use synonyms
island
in 2010 and Use synonyms
this
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number
went up in 2011 to reach half Use synonyms
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million
,Correct article usage
a million
then
dropped again in 2012 to the same Linking Words
number
as Use synonyms
2010
at 0.3 Change preposition
in 2010
million
. Use synonyms
However
,the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
rose gradually over the Use synonyms
followed
Replace the word
following
years
from half Use synonyms
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million
to reach the highest Correct article usage
a million
number
of Use synonyms
two
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million
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visitors
in 2017.
The second Use synonyms
type
of Use synonyms
visitors
who are staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
start with around 7000 Add an article
the island
thousends
in 2010 to reach 1.5 Correct your spelling
thousand
thousands
million
in 2013. Use synonyms
Then
from 2013 to 2015, it Linking Words
remain
steady at 1.5 Change the verb form
remains
million
Use synonyms
tourists
.For the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
two
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years
the Add a comma
,years
number
of Use synonyms
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island's
Correct article usage
the island's
visitors
fluctuated to reach Use synonyms
approximitly
one-fifty Correct your spelling
approximately
Million
of Use synonyms
visitors
. The total Use synonyms
number
of the Use synonyms
two
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type
of Change to a plural noun
types
tourists
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up upon
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in
years
and it reach over 3.5 Use synonyms
Million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, years, tourists, two, type, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 5 times.
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