The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.

The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.
The provided bar graph compares how often folks in the USA consumed fast
food
in 2003,2006 and 2013.
Overall
, the percentage was reduced throughout the time period and each year the highest trend was to go to a restaurant at least once a week or one/two times per month.
Firstly
, there were just under 5% of people who eats fast
food
every day,
while
the percentage declined
further
in 2013.
Besides
, the number of people who visited a junk
food
restaurant several times a week was approximately 17% in 2003 and climbed to 20% in 2006
then
declined to about 16%. Following a similar pattern, in 2003, more than 30% ate fast
food
and increased closer to 33% by 2006 and dropped to around 27%.
However
, the number of people who ate junk
food
once or twice a month increased from 30% to 33% approximately,
while
experiencing a dip of 25% in 2006.
Furthermore
, fast
food
consumers who visited a restaurant a few times a year began at around 12% and went up to 15% and remained the same.
Finally
, it shows a decrement in folks who never ate
the
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in the
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fast
food
category which was less than 5%.
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