To improve road safety, there should be more severe punishment for drivers who break the rules. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some punishment
needed
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for drivers who break the rules in order to increase road safety.
According to
the statement, I agree because some
people
can be more careful on the road when they are aware
about
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the rules. In summary, the responsibility of road safety is for all the
people
who
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it. Not only for the drivers but
also
for
people
who walk and the store owner on the edge of the street.
Thus
, it is important to follow the rules and respect other
people
.
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