The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given figure compares the development of Queen Mary Hospital in three different years every two decades, starting from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, there were some alters in the facilities of the hospital located on the side of the boulevard over the period.
According to
the data, It can obviously be seen that in 1960 there was a shopping
centre
in the west of the hospital and the farmland was just below the store. A cancer
centre
and pharmacy took over the shopping
centre
in the following twenty years
as well as
a nursing school was constructed on farmland.
Although
there were some new buildings, the car park still existed in the same size and position in the southeast of the hospital by 1980.
Furthermore
, the car park,
however
, gave half of the space for nursing school in 2000.
As a result
of
this
construction, the cancer
centre
extended its area wider.
In addition
, there are no changes registered by the pharmacy and hospital building.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructural evolution
  • healthcare facilities
  • technological advancements
  • capacity expansion
  • modernization efforts
  • historical layout
  • landscape adaptation
  • access routes
  • renovation and improvement
  • initial structure
  • environmental considerations
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