The maps show the park which was built in 1920 and current construction of the park.

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in grange park since 1920. A glance at both

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shows that there were some incredible changes during the period. Take a look at the centre of the

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. in 1920, the water fountain was placed in the main part of the

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,

however

, today it was taken over by the rose garden attached with seats, located on each side and corner of the park, on every side of it . Just on the left of the fountain, the stage for musicians was omitted and an amphitheatre for concerts was built on the place.

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, previously, rose gardens that were three in number were reduced and only the above

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the amphitheatre still existed

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the cafe today was constructed to replace the garden beside the entrance. The pond for water plants moved a little bit in the south, and the glass house no longer existed currently.

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place of the pond was built a playground that children could access it.

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to maximize the space and mobility, a car park was erected

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Arnold venue.