In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In multiple countries, some folks argue that it is required to spend more money on building new railroads for fast
trains
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others believe that money should be invested in improving existing public Linking Words
transport
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essay will discuss both aspects and my personal perspective is that current Linking Words
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issues should be sorted out prior to creating new railways.
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Firstly
, introducing new fast-moving railway systems to a country could be beneficial to the public as it leads to saving time. Nowadays, people spend more time travelling to and from work every day. Linking Words
For example
, Sri Lanka which uses old Linking Words
trains
and railways takes considerably more hours to travel between cities. Use synonyms
As a result
, travellers lose valuable time that they can be utilized for work or for families. Modern faster locomotives and tracks could solve Linking Words
this
issue to a significant level. Linking Words
Secondly
, most modern locomotives operate via electricity and magnetic-based energy, which reduces fuel consumption. Fuel-based Linking Words
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are comparatively less efficient and they pollute the air quality. Use synonyms
This
would be sorted with the arrival of modern Linking Words
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, if that money can be invested in current public transportation, it would be more beneficial. One reason for Linking Words
that is
the number of people who use other public Linking Words
transport
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passengers only between long distant cities. But buses can travel for short distances. So that those short distance travellers could get advantages if the roads and busses can be improved. Use synonyms
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, traffic could be reduced by improving existing public Linking Words
transport
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, many people use their personal vehicles to travel in Sri Lanka, as the current public Linking Words
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methods are unsatisfying. Use synonyms
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, traffic has increased dramatically Linking Words
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rush hours. If the government can improve current issues, they can solve traffic issues which indirectly benefits saving fuel and capital.
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To conclude
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it is clear that
both aspects of introducing new locomotives and improving current transportation can bring more advantages. Linking Words
While
improving existing systems could have extra benefits for society.Linking Words
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