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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the
school
 ,curriculum most of the sports that are offered are competitive types.
however
, some people argue that they should not have a place in the
school
 programs I disagree with
this
 statement on the ground that competitive play
make
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 scion effort
for
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their skills to improve themselves in the specific sport to win,
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this
 hard work for being the winner in a competition makes the character of each student strong and teaches them by attempting in life they can reach everything they want.
therefore
,
this
 is an amazing way to learn students and the most important method for being successful in the future. another reason that makes me disagree with
this
 conception is in most competitive sports
children
 should play together .
furthermore
,
this
 action has a myriad of experiments and fun things that make them more cheerful and delightful during
school
 time.
Also
, nowadays researchers claim that in playful ,situations students are more able to learn new things and the new way of learning tough majors for
children
 is to come up with games or new plays.As a
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result
children
 can learn their lessons better and improve in different knowledge. by way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that competitive sports should be in the
school
 curriculum
due to
 the fact that
this
 can help students to progress in their personality of hardworking and efficient playful area for
children
's education.
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