Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the

school

,curriculum most of the sports that are offered are competitive types.

however

, some people argue that they should not have a place in the

school

programs I disagree with

this

statement on the ground that competitive play

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scion effort

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their skills to improve themselves in the specific sport to win,

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hard work for being the winner in a competition makes the character of each student strong and teaches them by attempting in life they can reach everything they want.

therefore

,

this

is an amazing way to learn students and the most important method for being successful in the future. another reason that makes me disagree with

this

conception is in most competitive sports

children

should play together .

furthermore

,

this

action has a myriad of experiments and fun things that make them more cheerful and delightful during

school

time.

Also

, nowadays researchers claim that in playful ,situations students are more able to learn new things and the new way of learning tough majors for

children

is to come up with games or new plays.As a

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result

children

can learn their lessons better and improve in different knowledge. by way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that competitive sports should be in the

school

curriculum

due to

the fact that

this

can help students to progress in their personality of hardworking and efficient playful area for

children

's education.