The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table and chart outline the number of sources of
police
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the police
budget
and the way of spending the budget
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Both of table and chart seem that they don't have big changes but we can also
recognize some little changes of
numbers from 2017 to 2018.
I will analyze the materials focusing on the slight changes.
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police
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the police
budget
between 2017 to 2018 can be seen that the budget
of police is totally increased. The source which is gained the most is local taxes, growed
approximately over than 10m. Compared to the count of Local Taxes, there is only slight growth in National Correct your spelling
grown
Goverment
and Other sources.
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Government
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the same
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