Countries around the would will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will you country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons and include examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the
challenge
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and the
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a
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sustainability in the countries is the most important factor to impact the climate global.
For
this
reason, cities have a great
challenge
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promoting sustainability in transport areas, businesses and the population. On the one hand, Barcelona has a lot of pollution, among the causes
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land, sea and air traffic. For
this
reason, the government have adopted
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about pollution.
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, driving is not allowed with
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car in
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center
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of
city
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and
then
, you will
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more
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and fees if you drive every day in the city. On the one hand, we are in a stage of inflation and
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of basic necessities
such
as electricity, housing and food are very expensive,
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the salaries aren’t going up. In the future,
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because everyone must be able to pay for basic needs.
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, if people earn more, they can consume more and
consequently
, public spending will be encouraged and PIB will increase. Anyway, the government should regulate the prices and stop
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inflation.
Finally
, if people drive less and use more public transport, the institutions create
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green areas and more open spaces, it will be possible to make the
challenge
a reality. In my opinion, I believe that
challenge
is possible as long as people contribute to a change of mindset towards
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sustainable world for all.
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