Countries around the would will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will you country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons and include examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the
challenge
to environment
and the Correct article usage
the environment
promote
Replace the word
promotion
a
sustainability in the countries is the most important factor to impact the climate global. Correct your spelling
of
For
this
reason, cities have a great challenge
for
promoting sustainability in transport areas, businesses and the population. On the one hand, Barcelona has a lot of pollution, among the causes Change preposition
in
is
land, sea and air traffic. For Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
reason, the government have adopted a more rules
about pollution. Correct the article-noun agreement
more rules
a more rule
For example
, driving is not allowed with old
car in Add an article
an old
Add an article
the center
center
of Change the spelling
centre
city
and Add an article
the city
then
, you will be pay
more Change the verb form
be paying
be paid
tax
and fees if you drive every day in the city. On the one hand, we are in a stage of inflation and Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
price
of basic necessities Correct article usage
the price
such
as electricity, housing and food are very expensive, however
the salaries aren’t going up. In the future, Add a comma
however,
this
situation should be change
because everyone must be able to pay for basic needs. Change the verb form
be changed
For example
, if people earn more, they can consume more and consequently
, public spending will be encouraged and PIB will increase. Anyway, the government should regulate the prices and stop the
inflation. Correct article usage
apply
Finally
, if people drive less and use more public transport, the institutions create a
green areas and more open spaces, it will be possible to make the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
challenge
a reality. In my opinion, I believe that challenge
is possible as long as people contribute to a change of mindset towards more
sustainable world for all.Add an article
a more
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