Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. White a letter: Say why driving license is advantage; Recommend a driving school; Give extra tips
Dear Mario, How are you? I your driving license. I would like to help you with
am
very happy when I read your email because it was great to hear from you and I'm glad to know that you thinking about learning to drive Wrong verb form
was
license
Correct article usage
a license
and
I give you essential Correct word choice
apply
advise
Replace the word
advice
Change preposition
on
this
,
because there are numerous advantages to Remove the comma
apply
have
a car drive. Wrong verb form
having
At
Change preposition
First
first,
you don’t need to wait for a public transport
and you will be independent to goRemove the article
public transport
a means of public transport
a mode of public transport
a
shop and anywhere you like. Change preposition
to a
In addition
, let me you
Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
suggest a recommendation to goFix the infinitive
apply
a
school driving that I wentChange preposition
to a
, the
name is PepeCar which is located in Barcelona. They are very Change preposition
to, the
professionals
and will help you in everything, giving you advice and tips for a good practice to drive. Fix the agreement mistake
professional
For example
, they will explain
you how Add the preposition
explain to
park
on the street or in narrow places. Anyway, for your Add the particle
to park
guidenance
, I would like to add extra tips that you don’t need to buy a car because if you want, I can share my car with you because I don’t use it much. I hope Correct your spelling
guidance
you
my tips will be useful and I expect news Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
you when you Change preposition
from
were
examined. Best wishes, Mireia.Wrong verb form
are
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.