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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. White a letter: Say why driving license is advantage; Recommend a driving school; Give extra tips

#friend #drive #advice #license #advantage #school #tips
Dear Mario, How are you? I
am
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was
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 very happy when I read your email because it was great to hear from you and I'm glad to know that you thinking about learning to drive
license
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a license
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and
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apply
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I give you essential
advise
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advice
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on
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your driving license. I would like to help you with
this
,
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 because there are numerous advantages to
have
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having
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 a car drive.
At
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First
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first,
you don’t need to wait for
a public transport
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public transport
a means of public transport
a mode of public transport
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 and you will be independent to go
a
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to a
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shop and anywhere you like.
In addition
, let me
you
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apply
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to
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suggest a recommendation to go
a
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to a
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school driving that I went
, the
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to, the
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 name is PepeCar which is located in Barcelona. They are very
professionals
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professional
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 and will help you in everything, giving you advice and tips for a good practice to drive.
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, they will
explain
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explain to
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 you how
park
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to park
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 on the street or in narrow places. Anyway, for your
guidenance
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guidance
, I would like to add extra tips that you don’t need to buy a car because if you want, I can share my car with you because I don’t use it much. I hope
you
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apply
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my tips will be useful and I expect news
to
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from
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 you when you
were
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are
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 examined. Best wishes, Mireia.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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