Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicine intended for human use , while other argue that it is cruel to do that . Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

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Topic Vocabulary:

**Medical Advancements**: Progress in medical science through research and innovation.
**Efficacy**: The ability to produce a desired result or effect.
**Protocol**: Established procedures and guidelines.
**Cruelty**: Causes of suffering or pain deemed inhumane and unnecessary.
**Moral Responsibility**: The duty to behave ethically and considerately towards others.
**Synthetic Tissues**: Artificially created tissues used for research purposes.
**Viable Alternatives**: Practical and acceptable substitutes.
**Inhumane**: Lacking compassion and causing suffering.
**Stakeholders**: Individuals or groups with an interest or concern in a particular issue.
**Complex Biological Systems**: Intricate structures and functions of living organisms.

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