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While some feel that GMOs are harmless and are essential to providing the world with an ample supply of food, others argue that GMOs are not safe because they pose serious health risks. Discuss.

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Today, maintaining good
health
 is very essential. Half of the people mention
GMOs
 are safe and do not bring any harm to consumers.
While
 the other half feel
GMOs
 invite a lot of
health
-related issues making
GMOs
 dangerous to consume.
GMOs
 have brought a lot of benefits to society and to farmers in several ways.
However
, we have to analyse both sides of the coin to understand it better.
GMOs
 are a good introduction to today's technology-driven society and sophisticated lifestyle. It provides good quality and quantity food to the consumers. Tied up in busy schedules, and without enough time to look after ourselves, it is always advantageous to maintain balance in our
health
 through
such
 initiatives. The less use of chemicals and pesticides brings home the best standard food. As per studies, it has been found that the utilization of
GMOs
 brings no harm to society and serves an adequate quantity of food.
However
, many argue the use of
GMOs
 triggers several
health
 risks
such
 as allergies, cancer etc. It has been observed that
due to
 the mutations in DNA, some people fear that eating foods with added genes may affect your DNA. Currently, no human research ties GMO intake to cancers. I would conclude that, in my view, the consumption of
GMOs
 has no adverse effect on our
health
. Researchers failed to prove the intake of
GMOs
 invites
health
 risks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • genetic modifications
  • yield
  • global population
  • resistance
  • pesticides
  • nutrient profile
  • malnutrition
  • long-term health effects
  • biodiversity
  • superweeds
  • productivity
  • food supply
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