The given table illustrates the data about the independent films released in the UK and the republic of Ireland based on the category of movies in the year 2012.
The table chart provides information about the
number
of film genres launched and the proportion of revenue by
selling tickets in the UK and the Republic of Ireland in 2012. Change preposition
from
Overall
, the
drama and Correct article usage
apply
documentary
were the most movies produced, Fix the agreement mistake
documentaries
however
comedy categories dominated the income.
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A
glance
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a glance
the glance
of
data show that both documentary and drama contributed 23,6%% of all releases and put them as Change preposition
at
highest
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the highest
number
. Following with commedy
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comedy
that is
only 26 productions, however
, it resgistered
as the most popular genre, almost Correct your spelling
registered
a
half compared Correct article usage
apply
others
and horror films were Change preposition
to others
frefered
by people after the funny Correct your spelling
preferred
referred
one
.
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ones
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, society also
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is also
atracted
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attracted
watching
scary movies where Change preposition
to watching
acording
to the data more than a fifth Correct your spelling
according
tickets
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of tickets
sold
. The Add a missing verb
are sold
biofic
was taken place as the lowest Correct your spelling
biopic
bionic
number
film
which was created, merely one. In Change preposition
of film
trestingly
, with the less Correct your spelling
trustingly
testing
number
, it could give 9.1% income from selling tickets. The rest of film
types were released just as less as 13 and contributed not more than 5%Correct article usage
the film
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