The graph shows the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.

The graph shows the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.
The table compares the five highest-ranking countries in terms of the
numbers
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of visits and the money spent by
tourists
over a period of two years.
It is clear that
France was the world’s most popular tourist destination in the years 2012 and 2013.
However
, the USA earned by far the most revenue from tourism over the same period. In 2012, 83
million
tourists
visited France, and the USA was the second most visited country, with 66.7
million
tourists
. Spain and China each received just under 58
million
visitors,
while
Italy was ranked fifth with 46.4
million
tourists
. 2013 saw a rise of between 1 and 4
million
tourist visits to each country, with the exception of China, which received 2
million
fewer visitors than in the previous year. Spending by
tourists
visiting the USA increased from $126.2
billion
in 2012 to $139.6
billion
in 2013, and these figures were well over twice as high as those for any other country. Spain received the second highest amounts of tourist revenue, rising from $56.3
billion
to $60.4
billion
, followed by France, China and Italy. Interestingly, despite falling numbers of
tourists
, Chinese revenue from tourism rose by $1.7
billion
in 2013.
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