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With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

#computers #internet #people #study #work #home #school #company
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 of using internet
technorogy
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technology
 and
computer
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computers
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 made individuals learn or work in their own
home
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homes
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. For
this
 situation, I suppose that the drawbacks, which
people
 become unable to build
better
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relationship
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relationships
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 with coworkers or friends without
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 communication outweigh the benefit, which workers or learners save their
time
 and money because of no need
of
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time
 for commuting or going to the school. On the one hand,
this
 trend might enhance the
quarity
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quality
 of life because citizens do not need to take the
time
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they utilised for going to the place, like
work place
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workplace
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, clients’ offices and schools. To save
these
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time
, they can utilize their
time
 more productively by enjoying their hobby or having a meal with their family or friend.
In addition
, commuting makes enormous workers get much stress,
due to
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most commuting trains are always packed with
people
, and it is generally crowded
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stations.
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these
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time
 leads to employees being healthy and their work efficiency would increase.
On the other hand
,
this
 environment
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 a risk to deprive the opportunity to effectively communicate with other colleagues or students, and it might cause
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 decrease
of
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communial
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communal
 consciousness. In Japan,
for example
, senior workers tend to have
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time
 to have
a
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dinner with coworkers, and
this
 action
have
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 a positive effect
to
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people
to rely
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 on each other.
However
, because of
pandemic
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the pandemic
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, they cannot make
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these
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time
, and
as a result
,
numerous
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number of
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younger
staffs
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 resigned within 1
years
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.
Additionally
,
remote
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environemt
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environment
 prevents elementary school children to make
a
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basis
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of
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the
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communication,
such
 as getting
along with
 other
people
 and expressing the esteems for
eldery
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elderly
people
. In conclusion, I reiterate that remote circumstances could cause
the
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 negative influence
such
 as lucking of
opportunity
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opportunities
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 for building relationships with others, and it outweighs the positive point,
which
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people
 can save
their
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time
instead
 of commuting or going to
the
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school.
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