The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the transformations in people that own the electrical machine in three kinds
as well as
how often the households Linking Words
doing
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did
chore
from 1920 to 2019
Fix the agreement mistake
chores
Overall
, for aspects of electrical devices , Linking Words
it is clear that
3 main types of these tended to increase Linking Words
year
by Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
While
the amount of time for housework wasn’t quite similar to those .
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Firstly
, despite the fact the Linking Words
the
proportion of ownership with refrigerator stood at over 0% , which is the lowest point and vacuum cleaner was the second lowest with 30 Remove the redundancy
apply
percents
but both witnessed Correct your spelling
per cent
the
dramatical jump and reached the highest ratio of 100% Correct article usage
a
finally
. Meanwhile , Linking Words
although
the percentage of washing machine ‘Linking Words
owner
got the best starting point with approximately 40% . But Fix the agreement mistake
owners
this
kind experienced not only Linking Words
unsustainable
increase but Correct article usage
an unsustainable
also
the ratio in Linking Words
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last
period Correct article usage
the last
were
lower around 25% than unsimilar things .
And Correct subject-verb agreement
was
lastly
, the Linking Words
year
1920 saw Use synonyms
the
good beginning of time spent Correct article usage
a
for
Change preposition
on
chore
with 50 hours per week . But Fix the agreement mistake
chores
this
number was no longer and declined significantly from the first Linking Words
year
and Use synonyms
hitted
Correct your spelling
hit
the
Correct article usage
a
disappointed
point in 2019 with only 10 hours .Replace the word
disappointing
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