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What is advantage and disadvantages of study in the international program

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The advantages of studying in international
programs
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 at a university. Obviously, improving your
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 skills because, in every international
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 ,
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 instruction is used throughout the four-year curriculum.
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 will help the students are more familiar with and proficient in using
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 than studying in a
Thai
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 curriculum. As you know,
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 has become so important in our lives. It is a language
that is
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 widely used all over the world.Most
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international
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the international
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programs
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 students can be graduated in 3
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 and a half
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 of
study
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 4
years
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, some of the
faculty
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 of international
programs
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study
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in
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on
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campus
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campuses
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 for 2
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 and 2
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study
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 aboard.
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 making, people who graduated from international
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 have a higher chance of getting a job.
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 disadvantages of being an international student,
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, of
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 the tuition fees of the international
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 some people think that very expensive compared to the regular
programs
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 and the international
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 in
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 universities are not very have various faculties for students to choose
like
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 the
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program
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 The reason why I choose the international
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 is
because
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 I am interested in the
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 of
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then
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 I found out that they have an international
faculty
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 of Law or we called LL.B., that
study
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 deeply in business law so I think if I
study
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 business law in
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 it would be good for my future career.
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 the tuition fees, I'm an
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program
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 student before so I know that the tuition fees
is
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 reasonable compared with what I will get from them.
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 international
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 is
depend
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 on the faculties but most
of
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international
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the international
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programs
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are
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have 3 rounds,
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the first
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round
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 is
portfolio
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a portfolio
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, the second
round
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 is
we
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know
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 as inter-admission1 and the final
round
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 is inter-admission 2.
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 the first
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round
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 most of
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faculty
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the faculty
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are
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use
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 the SAT score,
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then
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and then
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 you have to have the
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 proficiency test like IELTS, TOFEL, CU-TEP or TU-GET you can choose
anyone
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any one
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 of these. The
faculty
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of
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for
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 these tests. And some are required
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portfolios
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 as well.
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 second and third rounds is the exam that the professors of the
faculty
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 made it.

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