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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and examples.

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Introduction
In today’s world, autonomous
vehicles
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 are a debatable trend subject for the whole automobile industry. Some brands are having paramount attention to developing their opportunities because they have huge market rates.
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 research promotes self-driving cars for the near future and car companies try to prepare their consumers if any demands begin to come through. I strongly believe that self-driving cars are going to change our daily in deeply because they just started with Tesla and they will currently affect transportation and personal drivers.
Body paragraph 1
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 with, autonomous buses will have effects on many kinds of social life routines.
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, having self-driving public transportation
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 reduce harmfulness to the environment because electricity does not have carbon footage.
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, bus drivers sometimes are stressed because of traffic congestion and some cities have a special line for just buses but it couldn’t enough reduce human mistakes to a minimum.
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, when public transportations have
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autonomous vehicle in all country, the countries do not require any question about air pollution from buses.
Body paragraph 2
On the one hand, when self-driving cars will be more popular, car accidents are going to decrease naturally. If mechanics take control of traffic, drivers cannot chance to disobey the rules.
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, texting is a new behaviour
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 driving a car and it causes accidents. That’s why self-driving
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 seem to save a life, any consequences couldn’t be from disobeying authorities or human errors anymore.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion that self-driving
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 are already a reality, which
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 to expand in the global future.
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 the high evolution of technology
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 a constant search for safety and comfortable by users, I presume that it will be increasingly ordinary for the presence of different types of autonomous transports.

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