More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

Plastic
can be found everywhere in the country, from our trash
bin
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to our ocean.
This
essay will try to elaborate what the cause of these conditions, and provides solutions
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our society. First and foremost, things made from
plastic
can be easily found everywhere.
For
example
, food packaging,
plastic
wrapper, toys,
even
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our
cultery
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cutlery
are made from
plastic
. One of the
reason
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is because of the cheap cost
production
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. Things
are
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made from
plastic
are cheaper than other
material
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materials
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, like iron
for
example
.
Plastic
also
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very light, so
its
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very convenient to bring. It
also
has many
colour
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that
very
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attractive,
thats
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why many people
likes
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it.
Moreover
,
plastic
material
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are
also
easy to make, so it will affect
to
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the price, it
become
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much cheaper than others,
plastic
table
for
example
is cheaper and lighter than
table
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made from wood.
On the other hand
, because plastics are very cheap, many
was
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thrown away after
single-used
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. It is actually a waste of
product
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products
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, but
this
is really
happened
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happening
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in our environment. People choose to buy again the same product than
to
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reuse it
,
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because they think that the quality is not as good as the new one.
Furthermore
, products made from
plastic
,
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can be easily broken if it
getting
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hits
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very hard. One of the
solution
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for
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this
problem is to try
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the
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plastic
,
for
example
not
thrown
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away
plastic
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the plastic
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wrapper, and
use
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using
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it
for
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make toys or other things. Always
bring
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extra
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bag
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when
do
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grocery shopping is
also
the best way to reduce
plastic
use. In conclusion,
instead
of stacking our
plastic
at home, we can use it in
more
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efficient way,
and
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try to
reused
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our
plastic
product
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products
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, and bring our own
bag
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when
go
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shopping.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • ecosystems
  • microplastics
  • degradation
  • contamination
  • wildlife
  • health risks
  • financial resources
  • food chain
  • visual appeal
  • ingestion
  • entanglement
  • urban areas
  • natural landscapes
  • waste management
  • sustainability
  • recycling
  • biodegradable
  • public awareness
  • legislation
  • regulation
  • single-use plastics
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