You have recently organized an event at a restaurant. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Give details about the event and how it went; • Tell how you were pleased with the restaurant’s service; • Suggest some improvements the restaurant could make. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing

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letter to applaud you for hosting my

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event successfully

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week. It was the annual event of

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, which we organize for all the

distributers

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and the staff members. I am very impressed with your staff's conduct and

way

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they handled all the guests. I would like to use

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opportunity to praise you for the variety you offer

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the menu

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liked by all the audience.

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, the food quality and service

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worth appreciating.

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, one of your staff members Mr. Rajesh helped me in every way possible to make

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event a grand success and I thank him for that.

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, there

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still a few improvements that you can make.

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, the sound system did meet the expectations.

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, the decoration theme was

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not up to mark. But, my

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experience was a memorable one and I will

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definitely

consider

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place for hosting future events. I hope my remarks are useful to you and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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grammar

Revise your letter for small grammatical errors and typos. For example, "did meet" should be "did not meet" and "definately" should be "definitely."

clarity

Consider breaking down complex sentences to make them clearer. For instance, the first paragraph could be split into two sentences for better readability.

task achievement

The letter is detailed and covers all required points, making it an effective response to the task.

tone

The overall tone of the letter is polite and appreciative, which is suitable for the purpose of the letter.

structure

The logical structure of the letter is strong, with clear separation of different ideas into paragraphs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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