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Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students, but it also ha a significant number of disadvantages. Discuss both sides of the arguments and give opinion.

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In
this
 developing era, the majority of
students
 have a chance to
study
 overseas. Individuals believe that studying in other countries can be beneficial for some
students
 but it has
also
 a number of drawbacks. In
this
 essay, I will give some reasons for both of these statements whether they are true or not. In recent years, most
students
 tend to live and
study
 abroad which has a higher quality educational system and there is a number of advantages which help foreign
students
. One of the main benefits is learning from international
students
 about their culture, and sharing experiments which have experienced.
For instance
, the perspectives of
students
, who
study
 and live in another country, will change, which means their skills related to the point of view will increase. They will tend to see something in various ways.
On the other hand
, it has
also
 drawbacks which are faced by foreign
students
while
 they are studying far from their hometown. The reason for
this
 is that language differences mostly make problems that people, who are from two or more different nationalities, are communicating.
For example
, Chinese and Mongolian
students
 difficult to understand each other, if they do have not any knowledge of their languages.
However
, solving
this
 kind of problem is possible, if they are really willing to
study
 and develop their academic knowledge.
To conclude
, lately, the possibility that studying in another country is welcome to every student. Even though it has several disadvantages, it cannot overweight the advantages of
this
 point.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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