In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and wha actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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Nowadays many cities and towns around the world become more populated which produces problems, one of which is a high volume of
traffic
. There are several ways to solve
this
obstacle, but it can not be solved instantly, they need a huge amount of front expenditure cost,
also
involvement and understanding from every layer of society to make it sustainable.
First,
the obvious cause of
traffic
jams is the high amounts of vehicles on the road, especially, private-owned
transportation
.
This
takes us to another problem about why the
city
populations favour private vehicles rather than public
transportation
, which mainly because of the bad
transportation
system in the
city
, makes it not accessible to all parts of the
city
.
Furthermore
, there is
also
a case in which
transportation
becomes a state economical profit and makes the people buy more private vehicles, they promote it with a small-affordable downpayment and low-risk credit.
For example
, in Indonesia, public
transportation
is so bad and always on the lower rank of state's priority.
Although
we already have an MRT in the previous capital
city
, Jakarta, the government still want to make the private
transportation
company thrives with an incentive for the people to buy it, even though it is unnecessary and can make the
traffic
jam worse in the long run.
Second,
to solve
this
problem the government have to understand why public
transportation
is important, even though, the profit to the national market is not that high compared to a private vehicle. They ought to make accessible and vast-reach
transportation
, by using the already existing
transportation
to be a feeder and reaching into the smaller roads, opening new routes, and increasing the quantities of public
transportation
.
For example
, in Surabaya, even though some universities are near bus stops, the students still have to walk over a km without a proper walking path and shading, which makes it dangerous for the people. In conclusion, there are many problems as the reason for the high volume of
traffic
jams and it is mainly the government's job to solve the problem by making a proper public
transportation
system in the cities or towns.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vehicle ownership
  • economic growth
  • affordability
  • public transportation
  • urbanization
  • population concentration
  • infrastructure
  • cultural preference
  • traffic management
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • pedestrian infrastructure
  • bicycle infrastructure
  • congestion pricing
  • rush-hour traffic
  • registration fees
  • traffic management systems
  • smart technology
  • synchronized traffic lights
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