The table below shows carbon dioxide emissions from transport in three different Eroupean countries.

The table below shows carbon dioxide emissions from transport in three different Eroupean countries.
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The given table demonstrates the amount of carbon dioxide released from transportation in three distinctive countries over a period of ten years, between 1994 and 2004. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it can be seen that the main source of discharging carbon dioxide was road transport, particularly in Germany, the amount was much higher than in any other nation but
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witnessed a downward trend.
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, there was
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an increase in the
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three categories, namely railways, civil aviation and shipping. Out of the four sources, road transport occupied a predominant share of carbon dioxide emissions with the highest amount in Germany, at 43,9 and 43,7
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in 1994 and 2004 respectively. Meanwhile, CO2 emissions from railways and shipping of the three countries fluctuated by over 1 million
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. All the figures for civil aviation between the two years grew, especially 1,2 to 1,4
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in France.
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,
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trend was true for all domestic transport since the CO2 releases of the United Kingdom and France soared considerably up to 36,0 and 38,7
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,
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Germany still took the most significant part but decreased.
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