The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas

The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
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The given diagram illustrates the steps of building a storage area using concrete canvas. Looking from an
overall
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perspective it is readily obvious that
this
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production consists of seven major steps,starting from manufacturing primary units and ending in establishing storage spaces.
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, the basic unit is produced using three materials, a watered-proof layer,dry concrete and a fibrous top surface and they are incorporated to produce the end product .
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they are folded as blocks and once they are ready to deliver distribution takes place to the required area.After unwrapping the three layers,it is spread in the ground using a rope attached to a vehicle and pegged into the land to avoid folding back and to keep it in position.Next , the air is inflated inside it converting the block into a spacious tent.After reconstructing it into a tent it is around 8meteres in height and
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water is splashed to the outermost covering.Settling the construction takes 20-24 hours and
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it is ready for the store.
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