Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some governments have

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opinion

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about the most essential goal of a

country

is the economic

progess

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progress

process

. Meanwhile, many people argue that many

type

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of

progresses

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progress

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are

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the same important too. I believe, the crucial goal depends on the situation in a

country

. In

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essay, I will share my opinion from my point of

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about these statements.

Economy

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The economy

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is a fundamental aspect

for

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a nation to

develop

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development

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, especially for

developing

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a developing

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country

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countries

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.

This

is because a

country

need

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budget

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a budget

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to give

the

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welfare

for

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the citizens including

for

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the

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poor family.

Further

, to increase the other fields

such

as

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transportation, education, and others

also

need money.

For instance

, Indonesia as a developing

country

tryto

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try to

construct

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many roads and transportation that need high budgeting.

Therefore

, the government

supporting

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the

enterpreneurships

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entrepreneurship

to

develep

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develop

their business since it contributes

for

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taxes to raise the national income.

However

, many people think that

economy

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the economy

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is not the most important aspect

for

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a

country

. I agree with

this

statement if it is for developed countries since they have been being in good finance.

Hence

, the

citizitens

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citizens

have been

being

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prosperous so that the countries can focus on other

progesses

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processes

progresses

. In Singapore, the people are prosperous since they have

good

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the good

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salary

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to

fulfill

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their needs.

Therefore

, the government have taken a look

for

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other aspects

such

as land expansion and education. It can be done if the

country

has good economic progress certainly.

To conclude

, whatever the most important

of

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type of progress for a

country

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goal, it depends on the situation in a nation. If they are still developing countries, of

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the

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economic progress is the most

crucia

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crucial

goal.

On the other hand

, many

progesses

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processes

progresses

should be focused

for

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developed

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the developed

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country

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as they are welfare already.