The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first map represents James Park in the year 2017 with 5000 visitors every month,
whereas
the second one depicts the proposal of the same site with four times the initial number of visitors by 2027. On the whole, the paths towards each building will have more branches with a statue in the centre of that park and the fountain which will be replaced by a gymnasium, theatre and garden
.
Now, turning to the details, it can be seen that the building of the science centre will be larger than before as shown on the proposed map in the north area as well as
a garden
nearby. On the opposite side of the garden
, the construction of the theatre will be started to provide more fun activities for locals. The playground and gym will be next to each other.
It is interesting to note that the garden
and gym will be under construction. Probably because in the future the organizer of the site wants to raise awareness of maintaining health among the people who visit James Park.Submitted by atikahap.yes on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words garden with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼