Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
believe that
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in recent days myriad of
health
problems
increased day by day which causes produce high levels of sugary
products
.
Therefore
, sugary food and
drinks
have to
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be made
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made
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more expensive to encourage individuals
eat
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and drink less
sugar
. In my opinion, sugary
products
not
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are not
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only
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reason
of
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health
problems
. There are several reasons
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that leads
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leads
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lead
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to
problems
of
health
. On the one hand, nowadays
people
have
demand
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a demand
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to consume sugary
products
. It
hasa
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has
bad effects on
people
's
health
.
This
is because sugary food and
drinks
leads
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to
health
problems
,
such
as obesity and diabetes.
For instance
, fizzy
drinks
contain high levels of
sugar
so, plenty of young
people
face to disease of diabetes.
However
, authorities have to find solutions to
illnesses
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the illnesses
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of
sugar
.
Main
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solution should be
made
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to make
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more expensive sugary
products
and
imposing
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taxes on the manufactured
products
of
sugar
.
On the other hand
, sugary food and
drinks
not
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are not
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main
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causes
leads
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to
health
problems
. Another reason is smoking tobacco. Smoking harms nearly every organ in the body. It increases
people
's risk of cancer, diabetes, heart disease, lung disease, and stroke. If individuals smoke more likely to catch tuberculosis,
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certain immune disorders.
For example
, Bhutan became the first country to ban the sale of tobacco and
to
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outlaw smoking in all public places.
People
found guilty of selling or smuggling tobacco into Bhutan can serve a prison term of three to five years with no chance of being granted bail.
To sum up
, from my perspective, everything which
people
eat belongs to
sugar
so
government
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the government
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can
made
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expensive prices of sugary
products
, but they can not cut down
sugar
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on sugar
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in
people
's entire life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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