Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
believe that,
in recent days myriad of Remove the comma
apply
health
problems
increased day by day which causes produce high levels of sugary products
. Therefore
, sugary food and drinks
have to Add a missing verb
be made
made
more expensive to encourage individuals Change the form of the verb
make
eat
and drink less Add the particle
to eat
sugar
. In my opinion, sugary products
not
Add a missing verb
are not
only
reason Correct article usage
the only
of
Change preposition
for
health
problems
. There are several reasons Correct pronoun usage
that leads
leads
to Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
problems
of health
.
On the one hand, nowadays people
have demand
to consume sugary Correct article usage
a demand
products
. It hasa
bad effects on Correct your spelling
has a
has
people
's health
. This
is because sugary food and drinks
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
health
problems
, such
as obesity and diabetes. For instance
, fizzy drinks
contain high levels of sugar
so, plenty of young people
face to disease of diabetes. However
, authorities have to find solutions to illnesses
of Correct article usage
the illnesses
sugar
. Main
solution should be Change the article
The main
made
more expensive sugary Change the verb form
to make
products
and imposing
taxes on the manufactured Wrong verb form
impose
products
of sugar
.
On the other hand
, sugary food and drinks
not
Add a missing verb
are not
main
causes Correct article usage
the main
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
health
problems
. Another reason is smoking tobacco. Smoking harms nearly every organ in the body. It increases people
's risk of cancer, diabetes, heart disease, lung disease, and stroke. If individuals smoke more likely to catch tuberculosis, develop
certain immune disorders. Correct word choice
and develop
For example
, Bhutan became the first country to ban the sale of tobacco and to
outlaw smoking in all public places. Fix the infinitive
apply
People
found guilty of selling or smuggling tobacco into Bhutan can serve a prison term of three to five years with no chance of being granted bail.
To sum up
, from my perspective, everything which people
eat belongs to sugar
so government
can Add an article
the government
made
expensive prices of sugary Wrong verb form
make
products
, but they can not cut down sugar
in Change preposition
on sugar
people
's entire life.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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