Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Movies

and internet

games

are nowadays very popular ,especially with the younger generation.Some of these contain some content of violation which few think is a sort of relaxation

while

others argue that should avoid

such

things.

This

essay shall discuss both sides and give my stand on

this

topic.

To begin

with,most of the cinemas are made of an imaginative story apart from a few biopics and real incidents.It is the right of the writer to build content through his creativity.If people have the sense to understand it as a story, which has been merely meant for entertainment, it's okay to have

such

ones.The best way to feature

such

movies

or

games

is to take the age factor into consideration.

For example

,many

movies

are pictured in theatres with the warning "children are not permitted ".As children are not in a mature state to understand it as an unreal one,it's always necessary to put warning

while

making action

movies

or

games

.

On the other hand

,some suggest

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completely removing

this

type of movie.Their stand is that there is nothing to learn from these

games

and

movies

.,

Moreover

the population will learn bad stuff and will try to copy them in their real life.

Much

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movie-themed

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is one of the major examples of

this

.

For instance

,many banks were robbed in the same way ,as

it

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was done in the movie.

This

can in turn increase robberies and other crimes .Many

of

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internet

games

have influenced people in

such

as way that

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they are spending most of their time on them rather than working or studying.

To conclude

,both have their own stands.There are a lot of people who are dependent on the entertainment industry.So banning

such

movies

can affect their life.So ,in my opinion, bringing the age bar can bring a great difference rather than a complete ban.