You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter in connection with the experience I get, after attending cookery classes at your institute. It was a wonderful time that I spent over there. Regarding my

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, what attracts me the most is the huge attention of the staff members towards their students. Other than

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, diverse techniques taught by the teachers to cook a specific dish are unique in nature, which helps me to make a variety of snacks at home. As I have earned a lot of confidence, by joining your batch, I cook regularly in the evening, especially during snack time. My family, in fact, now loves Chinese snacks cooked by me, which gives me a feeling of satisfaction.

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week, I made Italian starters for my friends, and everyone praised me a lot.

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, I am

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looking forward to learning the main

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so that I could master that portion of cookery too. If possible, try to initiate

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course

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so that my kids would start eating homemade food rather than street meals. Thank you for

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a useful

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. Yours faithfully, Yogita Gupta

Submitted by Yogita on Thu Feb 09 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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thirdly
in additional
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for example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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