Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Movies
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and
computer
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games
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contain violence. Few individuals assume they have a negative impact on society and should be banned.
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others claim they are just a source of relaxation. I think
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demerits because many
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are very informative for every people ,
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the masses
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face many interpretations by watching violent films
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criminal advertisements.
Movies
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and
computer
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games
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can be proved constructive in many terms of learning others' opinions , language
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culture and with providing society with a great massage. It means, gaining knowledge they can use where they want.
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a swamped ,schedule everyone needs relaxation and a refresh of the brain.
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, people can spend some quality time with their friend's members by watching films and children spend time with their friends by playing
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games
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child's brains become sharper by playing
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, they relieve stress by watching
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they can share movie experiences with others.
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spending more time on
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games
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children become lazy because they do not take part in outdoor activities.
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, nowadays children easily develop violence by watching
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because they have not majority that what is good for them or not. To quote an example, rap is increasing dramatically because mostly in
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have
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scene.
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, They do crimes at school with friends. In conclusion,
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watching
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source of entertainment we cannot ignore its drawbacks
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as violence and
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more dependent on
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games
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • empathy
  • aggressive behavior
  • normalization of violence
  • explicit content
  • mature audiences
  • societal well-being
  • content restrictions
  • fictional violence
  • stress relief
  • personal consequences
  • outlet
  • pent-up emotions
  • censorship
  • freedom of expression
  • artistic expression
  • storytelling
  • parental guidance
  • negative impacts
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