The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
The tables compare the
sales
between tea and pineapples in five European countries in 2010 and 2015.
It is clear that
the number of tea products sold in France and great
quantities of pineapples puts on sale in Austria in 2010 and 2015.
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the great
According to
the first table, tea sales
have increased especially in France from 2.5 in 2010 to 21 million euros in 2015. On the other hand
, sales
in other countries slightly increased, for ,instance sales
in Austria were higher two times in 2015 from 2010, in Germany and Norway have increased by 0.2 and in the Netherlands have risen by 0,7 million euros in 2015.
In the second table, the selling of pineapples in Austria has dramatically increased. It was twofold in 2015 from 2010. On the other side sales
in two countries have slightly increased such
as France and Netherlands. Despite sales
in Norway and Germany slightly decreased.Submitted by febriantyhasanah on
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