You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
letter with regard to living in college accommodation next year
during study
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in a college. I am looking for a single room with plenty of fresh air and natural light with a proper ventilation system. The room must have an attached washroom as I am not willing to share it with anyone.
, it has a bed, a side table for a lamp, a study table with a chair and a balcony. As I am vegetarian and very concerned about my health my preference regarding food may be different than others. I like to have less oily and medium spicy meals with at least contain small portion of fresh salad for lunch. Every year students from different places come by any chance if you cannot meet my requirements as I like to live near the university so what are other options with reasonable price. I can
get a room with a family house. For
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? looking forward to your reply. Kind Regards, Chris
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea or request, avoiding unnecessary repetition and irrelevance to the topic.
coherence cohesion
Consider rephrasing sentences for better clarity and flow, and use linking words to enhance the connections between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
Address all bullet points given in the task equally and provide sufficient detail for each, ensuring a complete response with a clear progression of information.
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Continue to use a polite and formal tone appropriate for a letter to college authorities while maintaining clarity in expressing your needs and questions.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hall of Residence
  • Accommodation requirements
  • Single room
  • Quiet environment
  • Proximity
  • Special requirements
  • Disability access
  • Living conditions
  • Dietary restrictions
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
  • Halal
  • Kosher
  • Allergy-sensitive
  • Alternative arrangements
  • Meal plan
  • Prompt response
  • Introductory sentence
  • Polite
  • Effective study
  • En-suite facilities
  • Recommendations
  • Campus facilities
  • Flexible
  • Consideration
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