A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter according to
your article which called "The book
that influenced me most"
In this
letter
I would like to describe my short before-after Add a comma
,letter
histroy
. Correct your spelling
history
This
book
about
the how right Add a missing verb
is about
nutriotion
program and the foods which we consume affected Correct your spelling
nutrition
to
our body and life quality.
It's all about our habits, wrong and Change preposition
apply
ancients
information about Change the noun form
ancient
the
eating.
Before the reading Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
Add an article
the book
book
I had Add a comma
,book
a
plenty of health Remove the article
apply
problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Due
to
, my mental health Correct pronoun usage
thisto
also
was bad. One day I saw this
book
in the bookstore and bought it. End
of the reading Change preposition
At end
this
book
all my thought was
changed. And my healthy Unnecessary verb
apply
nutration
journey Correct your spelling
nutrition
was
started Unnecessary verb
apply
since
Change preposition
on
those day
. Now I feel my self very energetic, motivated, and smart. Because I know already that Change the determiner
that day
those days
nutration
has a great effect Correct your spelling
nutrition
to
our brain too.
I Change preposition
on
extreamly
Correct your spelling
extremely
bleave
that, Correct your spelling
leave
believe
this
book
changed and will change a lot of peoples
Change noun form
people's
life
positively.
Replace the word
lives
Thanks
you in advance for reading my letter.
Kind regards,
Leyla Karimli.Replace the word
Thank
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.