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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter
according to
 your article which called "The
book
 that influenced me most" In
this
letter
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 I would like to describe my short before-after
histroy
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history
.
This
book
about
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is about
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 the how right
nutriotion
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nutrition
 program and the foods which we consume affected
to
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our body and life quality. It's all about our habits, wrong and
ancients
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 information about
the
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eating. Before the reading
of
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book
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 I had
a
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plenty of health
problem
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.
Due
to
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, my mental health
also
 was bad. One day I saw
this
book
 in the bookstore and bought it.
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 of the reading
this
book
 all my thought
was
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changed. And my healthy
nutration
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nutrition
 journey
was
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started
since
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those day
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. Now I feel my self very energetic, motivated, and smart. Because I know already that
nutration
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nutrition
 has a great effect
to
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 our brain too. I
extreamly
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extremely
bleave
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leave
believe
 that,
this
book
 changed and will change a lot of
peoples
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life
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 positively.
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 you in advance for reading my letter. Kind regards, Leyla Karimli.
Submitted by leylakarimli1 on

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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