The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical  appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about
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rates
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of
China
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and the
USA
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from 1920 to 2000.
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, it is readily apparent that the two countries showed similar trajectories and fell over the periods. The
birth
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rate
of
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the
USA
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was higher than
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china
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in china
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for the majority of
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the times
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times
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, with two brief exceptions. In
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, the
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of
birth
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was
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11%, which was only 1% upper than that of
China
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. The patterns of
two
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figures were similar until around 1930. After that time, there was a significant surge
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the
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rates
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in the
USA
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rose slightly. Both
rates
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of born babies descended considerably, dipping to above 10% after the moment of increasing trends. The
birth
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rate in
China
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went up steeply, which is four times higher than the proportion
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that
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5 years
ago.
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,
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birth
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the birth
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rates
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of
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in
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the
USA
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grew gradually, accounting for almost 15%. But all of them dropped sharply to finish at 7% and 3% respectively to end
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the period surveyed.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, china, usa, birth with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • amount of time
  • housework
  • households
  • significantly
  • increased
  • decreased
  • majority
  • refrigerators
  • washing machines
  • televisions
  • advanced
  • dishwashers
  • air conditioning units
  • average
  • tasks
  • cooking
  • cleaning
  • laundry
  • availability
  • easier
  • faster
  • evolution
  • impact
  • distribution
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