The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
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The map shows how a
village
called Ryemouth has developed over the
last
twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the
village
where the sea is there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to
this
was a small cafe. On the other side of the
road
running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel,
while
situated in the
north east
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northeast
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part of the
village
was
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were
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farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the
village
was located in the
north west
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northwest
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around a main
road
that runs from the coastal
road
, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller
side-street
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side street
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. Turning to the
present day
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map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have before. Having been converted into a golf course, the farmland has now gone,
while
the forest park has been removed to make way for tennis courts.
Although
the old houses remain, new ones have been built,
along with
a new
road
with two new houses beside it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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