The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne
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The given diagrams demonstrate the amount of money used for airline tickets between
two
Australian cities, namely Sydney and Melbourne over a period of
two
weeks in 2013. Looking from an
overall
perspective, the
two
places witnessed the same trend, to be more specific, the flying cost seems to remain stable on weekdays and became much higher on the
last
days of the week. With regard to the first chart, there was a considerable decline in the cost on Monday between the
two
weeks, from 80 to 50 dollars.
However
, in the next six days, both weeks saw a similar trend. From Tuesday to Thursday, it stayed over the price of 35 dollars before rising sharply to 75$ on Friday. After that, at the weekend, the prices decreased steadily to 70 and 50 dollars respectively. From Melbourne to Sydney, the same trend was
also
recorded. There was a drop of 20$ on Monday and especially Friday
,
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when people had to spend the highest amount of money in the first week, at 80$ .
Additionally
, the cost during other weekdays and weekends was maintained at 35 and 50$, except for a fall of 10$ on Saturday.
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