The charts below gives information about the price of tickets on airline between Sydney and Melbourne

The charts below gives information about the price of tickets on airline between Sydney and Melbourne
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The bar charts display the cost of one airline's tickets between
Sydney
and
Melbourne
, Australia over a
two
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two-week
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week
period in 2013.
Overall
, in both directions, the ticket
price
from Friday to Monday was broadly higher than on other weekdays.
In addition
, except for
week
1 from
Sydney
to
Melbourne
, flights on Fridays were the most expensive. Looking at the direction from
Sydney
to
Melbourne
, the ticket
price
on Monday in
week
1 was the highest among all, at 80
dollars
, twice as much as that of
week
2. In both weeks, Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday did not cost each passenger more than 40
dollars
. The prices on Friday rose to 76
dollars
while
the figures for Saturday and Sunday were cheaper, at 70
dollars
and 50
dollars
respectively. Turning to the ticket
price
from
Melbourne
to
Sydney
, in
week
1, the
price
on Monday started at 60
dollars
, 20
dollars
more than that of
week
2. The fare on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday in both weeks was similar, 35
dollars
. Tickets on Friday were offered at the highest
price
during the
week
, reaching 80
dollars
in
week
1 and 60
dollars
in
week
2. For the rest of the
week
, the prices were at most 60
dollars
.
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