The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towans and cities closing do you agree or disagree??

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Nowadays,
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influence by
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as Amazon,Flipkart,Nykaa,Meshoo and Paytm and many more,they buy from these platforms in the present era.
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online shopping become very popular among humankind and they grow quickly like a booming fire
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some argue that
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all outlets in city centre areas and in remote or rural areas will be closed In future. In
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essay,I will discuss both viewpoints and give my perspective in the trailing paragraph. On the one hand, there are several reasons for
people
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choose an
e-platform
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for shopping among all,the most common reason is
discounts
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and offers. The online platform gives various offers and
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to
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the local shop vendors give lesser
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after bargaining with them. ,
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youngsters do have not that many skills in barging
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as elders.
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, the masses don'
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like to go outside shopping because of the huge traffic and crowd because they have only one day off all their work at weekends.In ,addition they can easily order groceries from Bigbazar and through many online applications.,
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they buy clothes and all the handloom things from the platform and delivery get to home within the stipulated time and if you don'
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like them
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you can exchange and replace them easily
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local
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vendor exchange after lots of arguments and
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they have the latest design or there are not updated by day to day fashion
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is
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the reason for
people
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influence by online shopping .
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, the
e-platform
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attracts
people
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through
discounts
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, offers and my latest design and fashion.
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,in the rural area
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shopping their groceries ,clothing and all handloom goods from local
shops
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because they don'
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trust
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they are not that educated so they don know how to use
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much
e-platform
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don'
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deliver in remote cities areas.,
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they have good relations with local
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and vendors, so they would like to buy from there so I don'
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think so online shopping will shut down all the
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in towns and cities area. Because all goods are not available on the
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we need to buy some tiny products from the local market. To wrap up the discussion, I partially agree with
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statement.because online shopping is mostly preferred by youngsters
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old
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prefer to shop at the local market because they have a good bonding with that shopkeeper.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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