The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towans and cities closing do you agree or disagree??

Nowadays,
people
influence by
e-platform
such
as Amazon,Flipkart,Nykaa,Meshoo and Paytm and many more,they buy from these platforms in the present era.
Due to
this
online shopping become very popular among humankind and they grow quickly like a booming fire
while
some argue that
due to
this
all outlets in city centre areas and in remote or rural areas will be closed In future. In
this
essay,I will discuss both viewpoints and give my perspective in the trailing paragraph. On the one hand, there are several reasons for
people
choose an
e-platform
for shopping among all,the most common reason is
discounts
and offers. The online platform gives various offers and
discounts
to
people
whereas
the local shop vendors give lesser
discounts
after bargaining with them. ,
Also
youngsters do have not that many skills in barging
such
as elders.
Moreover
, the masses don'
t
like to go outside shopping because of the huge traffic and crowd because they have only one day off all their work at weekends.In ,addition they can easily order groceries from Bigbazar and through many online applications.,
Also
they buy clothes and all the handloom things from the platform and delivery get to home within the stipulated time and if you don'
t
like them
then
you can exchange and replace them easily
while
local
shops
vendor exchange after lots of arguments and
also
they have the latest design or there are not updated by day to day fashion
this
is
also
the reason for
people
influence by online shopping .
Also
, the
e-platform
attracts
people
through
discounts
, offers and my latest design and fashion.
However
,in the rural area
people
shopping their groceries ,clothing and all handloom goods from local
shops
because they don'
t
trust
e-platform
they are not that educated so they don know how to use
e-platform
also
much
e-platform
don'
t
deliver in remote cities areas.,
Also
they have good relations with local
shops
and vendors, so they would like to buy from there so I don'
t
think so online shopping will shut down all the
shops
in towns and cities area. Because all goods are not available on the
e-platform
we need to buy some tiny products from the local market. To wrap up the discussion, I partially agree with
this
statement.because online shopping is mostly preferred by youngsters
while
old
people
prefer to shop at the local market because they have a good bonding with that shopkeeper.
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