The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The given diagram demonstrates the greenhouse effect on the earth through increased emission of
carbon
dioxide
via burning fuel and decreased reabsorption of the gas due to
the felling of trees.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent that global warming is a vicious cycle which initiates with excessive production and unsuccessful reabsorption of carbon
dioxide
which are the result of excessive burning of fossils and massive deforestation respectively.
The sun is the greatest source of power to our planet, it delivers light, and heat
in electromagnetic waves.Heat
power derived from the sun is absorbed by the ground and water and they emit this
power as heat
rays again into the higher atmosphere making the earth cool and comfortable.
Vehicles which use burning fossil as their energy source surplus a lot of carbon
dioxide
, exceeding the limits that nature can handle.Furthermore
,the exponential amount of heat
emitted into the environment by factories while
generating energy through burning hydrocarbons releases carbon
dioxide
.on the other hand
,cutting down trees that are natural detoxifiers of green gases has contributed to this
issue in a critical way.These gases form a layer of thick clouds which obstruct the pathway of reflection of heat
from the lower atmosphere to the upper,trapping the warmth within the globe and causing global warming.Submitted by g.s.subasinghe on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, heat with synonyms.
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