One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can now be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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this
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the improvement of technology has Add a comma
,era
been
caused one problem Unnecessary verb
apply
that
many jobs take Correct pronoun usage
apply
control
by robots or computers Wrong verb form
controlled
instead
of people
. In my opinion, I believe that the
technological improvements will lead to more Correct article usage
apply
beneficial
for human beings. Replace the word
benefits
This
essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage
of using robots or Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
computers
automation in the Change the noun form
computer
workplace
.
To begin
with, The utilization of robots to change human role
in Fix the agreement mistake
roles
Add an article
the work
work place
will cause many Correct your spelling
workplace
people
lose
their Add the particle
to lose
job
. Many kind
of jobs Change to a plural noun
kinds
have
Change the verb form
has
a
same pattern that could Correct article usage
the
be replace
by Change the verb form
be replaced
Add an article
a robot
the robot
robot
. Fix the agreement mistake
robots
For instance
, waitress
in a restaurant they have one Add an article
a waitress
the waitress
job
to serve the costumer
, so the owner of Correct your spelling
customer
restaurant
Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
change
Correct subject-verb agreement
changes
this
role by
Change preposition
to
the
Correct article usage
a
robot
to efficient
the cost they spent. Change the word
efficiently
As a result
, many people
who work
as a waitress have lose
their Change the verb form
lost
job
due to
the reason that robot
is more effective than human.
In contrast
, The new technologies of using Add an article
the robot
a robot
robot
in the Fix the agreement mistake
robots
workplace
will bring more beneficial
to be more productive. If Replace the word
benefits
human
have Fix the agreement mistake
humans
limit
energy and time when they do their Wrong verb form
limited
job
; robot
could Fix the agreement mistake
robots
work
better with limitless of
that. Change preposition
apply
For example
, government abolish a rule that people
have to work
with maximum 8
hours a day, but Change preposition
of 8
robot
can do more than that. Fix the agreement mistake
robots
Consequently
, company
will be more productive and Add an article
the company
spent
less time when they have to finish the Wrong verb form
spend
job
.
To sum up
, the trend of using robot
in Add an article
the robot
a robot
a
Correct article usage
the
workplace
have
Add the particle
tohave
cause
a problem Wrong verb form
caused
that
many Change preposition
in that
people
will lose their job
. Meanwhile, I think it is truly agree
that Change the verb form
is truly agreed
this
phenomenon give more beneficial
to the company Replace the word
benefits
due to
the productivity in workplace
.Add an article
the workplace
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