It is commonly believed that nowadays the main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s world, many people believe that several factors can affect

children

’s growth, from media to pop culture

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and interactions with relatives.

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also

another perspective that family

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a dominant role. I will discuss

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views in

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essay. First and foremost, some people believe that several factors are imperative for

children

’s development which can be from some media, pop culture or even their surroundings.

Children

nowadays tend to spend much of their leisure time using gadgets for surfing the internet, making it inevitable for them to avoid many interactions with it. Because of that reasons, many young generations are more familiar with reading online or listening to podcasts using Spotify.

Therefore

, it is true some of them can be

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fast

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than only reading

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the technology enhancement.

Furthermore

, friends

also

can be very crucial because they can communicate intensely, not only in school

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but

also

by chatting or video calling after school days.

For example

, they can arrange some zoom meetings with friends to catch up later.

As a result

, their closest friend can be very attached to

children

’s daily life.

Then

the second view still believes that family have an important role

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children

’s development. In the first place, the family will be the first place for

children

to rely on and tell many stories.

For example

, in every case that

children

have been through, their parents have always been there and told it is wrong or not to do certain kinds of things.

Secondly

,

children

’s development is really related to how their parents teach and interact

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a daily basis, which can shape them to be what

children

are now.

As a result

, their

children

will follow their parent’s behaviour,

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and bad

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. In conclusion,

both

views have a positive side and can be implemented in

children

’s daily life. Given

this

situation, I recommend that parents try

both

views to see the effects which can give the best results.